Demetri Saint Randrac

Demetri, you've done it again. Those commas are not meant to be there. Take them out. They're completely ridiculous. Who, threw the rock, that landed, on Jim? The rock, whose ...

Six months later, I think, maybe I could've done without the commas. Hmm, who would've thunk?

I can't help when reading a response but think to myself: "These people are wrong and I'm right. Don't they see this? Whats the problem here?" But then, I think ...

Kyllorac, if I try to see this from your point of view, it makes a little sense. You don't suggest complete removal of the commas, rather a different placement. This ...

I see what you mean about the periods, I had thought when composing this that there should be some. But you are right in one regard, to post where I ...

(SIGH) I hope my exasperation is evident. The commas are there for a reason. Would you otherwise think they showed up by accident? Some freakish, heavily overlooked mistake? God no. ...

Somewhat lost in the negativity of your "critique", I find it hard to implement the changes you have suggested. However, perhaps that is due in part to the fact that ...

I am really grateful for you review Stella. A lot of it made sense and I see how much can be changed/altered. However, there are some things I must clear ...